Thanks LowPost42,

I believe my swing not to be a One Plane Swing - my arms appear to be on a different plane at the top of my swing than my shoulder plane, well, I think they do ?!

I'm trying to take the club away in one piece with no hand manipulation, I have in the past been very handsy, rolling the wrists on the take-away and thus fanning the club face open and obviously coming too much on the inside on the backswing. Does my take-away look ok, or is it still incorrect ?

Many thanks,
Steve